Predator Broken Tusk- Part 8

Not in a extremely gd mood today, my dad he verbally piss me off to the rooftop. Very very angry at the moment, anybody, or any1 that irritates me will suffer... This comic strip, im not partically satisfied on the bottom right hand corner, something is wrong. I jus cant make it out, guys who are reading this pls do give comments. Maybe becoz of my temper, i cant draw well.... i dunno.

The story cont's- Broken Tusk's having heard the snap of the twig rears into battle mode. The creature is a raptor, another native creature to this planet. The smell of the rotten lizardmen had attracted it to investigate the aroma. It has found the Predator with the carcasses, but why eat rotten meat when u can have fresh ones? It prepares to ambush the predator with its tail rearing up. Broken Tusk activates the shoulder cannon, as he expected company, meanwhile, the aliens uses their saliva to encase the Allosaurous, to prevent it from moving much when the chestbuster is going to burst out of the body.

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